Workshop Writers

July 20, 2011 Workshop, Writer Comments Off

Writer Positions

The Fictionista Workshop writer is an integral part of the workshop as a whole. Writers are key to the success of the workshop process. Working with other writers, both established and new, encourages writer to aim for personal success, giving credibility to a proven process. Without writer participation, the workshop would be non-existent. Writer feedback and participation is critical for completion of their own product and offering assistance and ideas in other parts of the workshop.

Writers must submit an outline of their story along with the completed novella, then work with the assigned editors to polish their story into a product ready for critique by the other workshop participants. Writers participate in the writing workshop under a set timeframe, participate on forums, and interact with readers and moderators.

In order to be considered for the Fictionista Workshop environment, all writers must submit both an application and a manuscript by the required date.

Manuscript Submission Guidelines

  • The current workshop is for completed works of original fiction.
  • In order to be considered for the workshop, all writers must guarantee no plagiarism in their work and provide history of any published work, if applicable. 
  • The “manuscript” consists of a full story outline and the first 5,000 to 7,000 words of the completed story.  Submissions should be uploaded into the Writer application where indicated.
  • Submissions must be in the form of a Microsoft Word document.

Application Guidelines

  • We are currently not accepting applications for the Writing Workshop. The Writing Collective will run a Spring session this year, and if you are interested, please click on the Collective link on the menu bar.
  • All applicants should have been contacted and notified of the status of their application shortly after being received.


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Workshop Participants

July 18, 2011 Participant, Workshop Comments Off

Participant Positions

Fictionista Workshop participants are readers, observers, and constructive critics, offering detailed feedback in formats appropriate for the workshop setting, as well as support and encouragement. Depending on how many applicants are interested, participants may be assigned to focus on the role of Research Participant, Analyst Participant, Characterization Participant, Dialogue Participant or a combination of these. Participants are a crucial, integrated part of the workshop and forum activity. Participants must remain active in the workshop in order to continue participating in the forum.

If you are interested, please consider applying. We accept applications all year long, though we only run a few workshops a year.

Application Guidelines.

  • All participants should have been contacted and notified of the status of their application shortly after being received.

Questions? Email us at contact@fictionistaworkshop.com

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Workshop Editors

July 18, 2011 Editor, Workshop Comments Off

Editor Positions

Fictionista Workshop editors work closely with writers and readers in the workshop environment, reviewing, analyzing, redacting, and sometimes even rewriting the work of writers.

Editors in the workshop include story editors and copy editors. Story editors look for plausibility in the work as a whole, evaluating plot, storyline, and character development, developing the material and clarifying ambiguities. They evaluate the manuscript and challenge the writer when they find faulty logic, inconsistencies, and vagueness. They also may rewrite, cut, clarify, and format the work as needed. Copy editors proofread a writer’s work, but also address stylistic issues, pointing out problems but not reworking them.  Other participants in each workshop share some of the duties of the story editor, since they will be commenting on plot, storyline, character development and character during the course of the workshop.

Key Qualities/Ethics/Code of Conduct

For our purposes, a good editor:

  • Understands and is sympathetic to the challenges writers face.
  • Recognizes and appreciates literary talent, and acts to foster and support it.
  • Open to many different styles of writing; treats them all respectfully.
  • Confident and secure in their judgment without imposing their own style on a writer.
  • Accepts that writers have final say on their own work, even when it goes against their editorial opinion.
  • Trustworthy; acts to protect the copyright and distribution of a writer’s work.
  • Has the moral and mental strength needed to resist pressure to create work aimed at earning a writer popularity and fitting in with community trends; protects the quality and integrity of the work.
  • Advocates for the needs of readers, even over the needs of publishers, agents, and sometimes writers themselves.
  • Energetic, enthusiastic, and resourceful in helping authors to discover the truth, purpose, and meaning in their writing.
  • Has great reserves of patience and tact; understands the difference between constructive criticism and negativity, opinion and fact, attending to the ways that their comments can affect a writer, their confidence, and quality of work.
  • Has the kind of character and generosity required to lend their time, energy, and all of their own creativity to projects for which they might never be recognized.
  • Supports writers through all the advantages and pitfalls of writing, including writer’s block, bad reviews, negativity from community members, popularity issues, and marketing ideas.
  • Likes writers and enjoys working with them.

Application Guidelines

  • Applications for the position of editor are accepted year round.
  • All applicants should have been contacted and notified of the status of their application shortly after being received.

Editing Test

Within 48 hours after we receive your application, FW will send you an editing test via email for completion and return within 72 hours.

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Moderators

July 18, 2011 Moderator, Workshop Comments Off

Moderator Positions - Applications for Fall 2011 Workshops Will be Accepted July 25th to August 15th

The forum moderator manages and directs operations of one or more individual forums (writing projects) on Fictionista Workshop. This role is critical to the success of a given project, essentially functioning as a workshop leader and project manager in addition to performing more traditional duties of a forum moderator, such as resolving disagreements and maintaining discussion threads.

Application Guidelines

  • Applications for the Fall 2011 Workshops will be accepted from July 25th through August 15th.
  • All participants should have been contacted and notified of the status of their application shortly after being received.

Expectations of an Ideal Candidate

  • As a forum moderator, you will facilitate the process in a public forum.
  • Moderators will be working with administrators, authors, editors, and registered participants and must maintain strong, friendly, and professional relationships.
  • Acquire skills in website management to assist Administrator in keeping forum topics organized.
  • Moderators are discussion leaders and will occasionally need to encourage workshop members to focus on specific elements of craft and story concepts of character/plot, directing them toward the desired goal for the workshop.
  • Modeling the critical process for the other workshop members is as important as the critique itself.
  • Moderators should be perceptive individuals and have a good understanding of how various issues can affect others when directing the outcome of a situation.
  • Anything requiring personal attention (ex. negativity expressed to another participant and/or moderator/author, abuse of thread, disregard of workshop rules, etc.) will be handled tactfully by initial contact via PM.

Questions? Email us at contact@fictionistaworkshop.com

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Chick Lit: Interview with Alisa Kwitney and Robyn Harding

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Some books are the perfect read for a breezy summer day, while others may require more concentrated attention.  In the last decade, fiction falling into the first category which have female protagonists are often labeled “chick lit,” while novels fitting the second category strive to be considered “literature.”  Over the next several weeks, Fictionista Workshop will consider chick lit and its place on our collective bookshelves through a series of interviews, essays and conversations about this new genre.

Love it or hate it, chick lit has become a label for a body of modern fiction.  Join us for a look at this phenomenon and its impact upon writers and readers.

We begin this series with a discussion between American author Alisa Kwitney and Canadian author Robyn Harding as they answer questions about why they love the genre, if not its moniker.

A Chick By Any Other Name: Does Chick Lit Need to be Re-Branded?

Horror. Mystery. Science Fiction. Romance. Chick lit. Among all these other genre names, “chick lit” stands out. It is clever, breezy and evocative of a certain happy fluffiness. But does the very name “chick lit” keep readers and critics from taking a book seriously? Authors Alisa Kwitney and Robyn Harding answer ten questions about chick lit and why they love the genre but not the name.

Q: When you began writing, did you set out to write a chick lit novel?

AK: Back in 1991, when my first novel was published, I don’t think the term had been coined. That was a long time ago, back before everyone had cell phones and surfed the internet, back when Mel Gibson was still insanely attractive but not openly insane. These days, a coming of age novel about a college freshman which deals with issues of food, weight and romance would be called chick lit. Back then, it was called “a comedy of manners” and was actually reviewed in the Sunday New York Times.

RH: When I wrote my first novel, The Journal of Mortifying Moments, I didn’t think about genre. I didn’t think about how my book would be marketed, where it would ultimately reside in the book store, or what color the cover would be. I just wanted to tell a story with heart and humor; a story that would be fun to read and fun to write.

Q: So when did you first discover that what you were writing was considered chick lit?

RH: In 2003, I sent my manuscript off to every fiction publisher in Canada (I’m Canadian), and within a few short months, I received rejection letters from all of them. According to these soul-destroying letters, Canadian publishers weren’t interested in commercial fiction. But when I submitted my manuscript in the US and the UK, I was immediately met with more interest. On the same day, I had calls from an editor in London and an agent in New York. They were both excited about my manuscript because “chick lit” was such a hot genre.

AK: My second novel, The Dominant Blonde, was written as a cross between a romance and a scuba diving caper. My natural tone tends toward dark humor, so when I was describing it, I called it “Carl Hiaasen on estrogen.” But when I submitted it, Avon said they thought the book could fit into their new trade paperback program. Somewhere along the line, I discovered that my book was now part of the chick lit flock.

Q: How did you feel about being labeled chick lit?

AK: I didn’t mind at all. I was a comic book editor, and I’ve always been a big fan of genre “I read romance, science fiction, horror, fantasy and mystery, as well as literary fiction. And my father was a science fiction author back when SF was considered pulpy trash. So I was thrilled to discover that my book happened to be part of a new genre that was both popular and clever.

RH: I was excited to be a part of this hot new trend. (Actually, I was so excited to be published, that they could have labeled my book “dog’s vomit” and I would have been okay with it.)

Q: Was there a downside to having your books published as chick lit?

RH: Around the time The Journal of Mortifying Moments hit the shelves with its pink cover (2004), I noticed that there were a lot of other pink books out there. Perhaps it was this saturation that led to something of a chick lit backlash. Suddenly, the term had become an insult. The genre was sniffed at by critics and journalists who dismissed it as mind numbing fluff. I soon realized that books with a female protagonist, a sense of humor and a pink cover, were somewhat marginalized.

AK: When chick lit was booming, there were a lot of lookalike covers on the shelves, and critics complained that the books all marched in downy yellow lockstep. In a cartoon from an English humor magazine, a picture of a Xerox machine was subtitled “Chick lit Author’s Writing Tool.”
But the truth was, there has always been a lot of variety in what gets called chick lit. The humor in chick lit could be clever and light or dark and raw. In some cases, of course, it could be facile and glib.   Some of the books were better than others. Some of the books were wonderful. And, as in any genre, some entries were embarrassingly bad.

Most of the critics didn’t make any distinctions, because most of them didn’t bother to actually open the books and read them. In her 2007 New York Times column, Maureen Dowd wrote, “I took home three dozen of the working women romances. They can lull you into a hypnotic state with their simple life lessons “one heroine emulated Doris Day, another Audrey Hepburn, one was the spitting image of Carolyn Bessette, another Charlize Theron “but they’re a long way from Becky Sharp and Elizabeth Bennet. They’re all chick and no lit.”

In that column, Dowd claimed to have read the novels, but I saw no sentence that suggested that she had done more than glance at the covers and skim the back cover copy. If she had submitted that essay to a fifth grade teacher, it would have come back with a scrawled red pencil comment: Give specific examples.

Q: Publishing trends come and go, but the backlash against chick lit was particularly strong. Do you have any theories as to why so many critics and authors, many of them women, publicly disparage the genre?

RH: One of the best examples of this “dispute” is the battle of the anthologies. In 2006, an anthology was released called This Is Not Chick Lit, Original Stories by America’s Best Women Writers. In the foreword, ironically entitled, “Why Chick Lit matters” editor Elizabeth Merrick writes that it’s okay to occasionally escape into “cotton candy entertainment.” She even admitted to (gasp) sporadically reading celebrity gossip magazines when she’s trying to pass time on the treadmill. But she also said that chick lit is formulaic, full of stock characters, “numbs the senses” and “reduces the complexity of the human experience.” Worse still, the genre was taking readers away from female writers of literary fiction who were more intelligent, thought provoking, and challenging, and who, obviously, were contributing short stories to her anthology.

In response, another anthology was released. This one was entitled: This Is Chick Lit (to be read with heavy emphasis on the Is, I’m sure). The editor of this book, Lauren Baratz-Logsted admitted that her anthology was “born out of anger”. Wasn’t it a shame, she wrote, that women were judging each other on what they were reading and what they were writing (though this sort of criticism dates back to1848 when Charlotte Brontë insulted Jane Austen’s work). In Baratz-Logsted’s opinion, reading was about entertainment, about escaping into a world with new friends, new relationships and new problems to over come – all of which chick lit books provide. She also said that to her, there are only two kinds of books: good, well written stories and bad, poorly written stories.

One of the most vocal critics of the chick lit genre (and contributor to This Is Not Chick Lit) has to be Curtis Sittenfeld (author of Prep, American Wife… ). In her New York Times review of Melissa Banks’ new novel The Wonder Spot, Sittenfeld said that calling a female writer’s novel chick lit is catty, not unlike calling her a slut.

One theory I’ve heard to explain the antagonism between female commercial writers (chicks) and literary writers (lits) is this: literary writers envy commercial writers their sales, while commercial writers envy literary writers’ reviews and accolades.

AK: For years, women’s traditional art forms, such as quilting, were thought to be somehow lesser than male forms, such as crafting furniture. Traditionally female occupations, such as nursing, were undervalued. Most early women novelists were derided as “scribblers,” and I think it’s been subconsciously ingrained in us that traditionally male pastimes are somehow more acceptable than traditionally female ones. Otherwise, why would violent thrillers receive less derision than romantic and domestic novels?

Q: Is there a good definition of chick lit? What is a chick lit novel?

AK: In the beginning of the nineties, most novels labeled “chick lit” employed a first person, humorous voice and a heroine in her twenties or thirties who works in publishing, and contains tales of domestic and romantic misadventure.

(As an aside, this need not damn the whole genre as derivative pap. The classic detective novel employs a hard-boiled, first person voice and a hero in his thirties who works as a private eye, and contains tales of domestic and romantic misadventure, along with some crime and violence. Classic horror and science fiction novels tend to have elements in common, as well.)

In any case, chick lit’s coming of age and “first job in the big city” novels were quickly joined by novels about women grappling with marriages, childbearing, midlife crises, betrayal and divorce. Sometimes the books were dubbed “hen-lit,” when the heroines were older; male writers’ domestic and romantic satires were termed “lad-lit.” But by and large, after 1998 or so, chick lit became a blanket term for almost any book written by a woman, provided it contained elements of humor and domestic drama.

RH: I agree that initially, chick lit described novels about a young woman trying to come into her own; find Mr. Right, the perfect job and lose 10 pounds. But I’ve written about murder, betrayal, divorce, midlife crises, and the struggle to raise a family. But I do so with a sense of humor. And I’m a woman. To many people, that makes me a chick lit author.

Q: So when is chick lit not chick lit?

AK: At this point, so many different kinds of books are called “chick lit” that I feel like everything is chick lit, and nothing is. I read an article about Eastern European and Indian and Scandinavian chick lit and how many of these novels deal with issues of rape and oppression. I have to say, there is something that feels very odd about calling a book “chick lit” if it deals with serious subjects in a serious manner – even if the author also uses humor.

RH: Ultimately, it’s the publisher who determines whether a book falls into the chick lit category. They choose the cover, the marketing, and the placement in the bookstore. My latest book, Chronicles of a Midlife Crisis is split between two narrators: one male, one female. And yet, it has a bra on the cover. (I’m not complaining. It’s a very nice bra.)

Q: Why do so many chick lit writers seem obsessed with Jane Austen?

AK: I think it’s tokenism. Jane Austen is the token domestic/romantic author who is granted literary status. But while Austen is wonderful, she is not the only sign of intelligent life in the romantic universe. There are other good writers out there who are concerned with romance and marriage but are not facile or shallow.

RH: I think a lot of us are obsessed with Dorothy Parker: her wit and intelligence.

AK: I love Dorothy Parker!

Q: Do male “lad lit” writers get treated differently than female “chick lit” writers?

AK: Absolutely. I’ve heard it said that if you want to write chick lit or romance and become a best-seller, write it under a man’s name and have somebody die. And even though I loved a certain current best seller, that axiom did occur to me when I read it.

RH: Nick Hornby is probably the quintessential “lad lit” writer, but based on his critical and commercial success, the label isn’t looked down on like its feminine counterpart. With women’s light fiction, we’ve got labels up the yin yang: Mommy lit, hen lit, knit lit, Christian lit, bride lit, widow lit, ethnic lit, and mystery chick lit. It’s the same with films. A female driven comedy is a “chick flick”. A male driven comedy is… a comedy. It makes me wonder why women are subject to so many labels when men are not.

Q: Does Chick Lit need to be rebranded?

AK: I don’t know. Sometimes I think we should embrace the “chick lit” label with a rebel “Dixie Chicks” spirit, and wear the downy yellow mantle with pride. At other times I think that the problem with labels is that they are, by definition, limiting. Interestingly enough, in the UK, where chick lit never went out of fashion the way it did in the US, a lot of reviewers no longer use the term.

At the end of the day, though, I did just decide to join a chick lit themed Facebook group because I knew I would meet kindred spirits.

RH: I know that these labels come down to marketing, which I totally get. What I don’t get are the sneers, the snubs and the condescension. Why is women’s humor so devalued? And what’s wrong with wanting to be uplifted by a book or a film, to see the comedy in even the most dramatic situations? But when a reader emails me and says I made her laugh, or cry, or she felt like I understood what she’s going through, I don’t care about being labeled. I’m just happy to be a writer.

To learn more about Alisa Kwitney, visit www.alisakwitney.com.
To learn more about Robyn Harding, visit www.robynharding.com.

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Courting the Classics: This Side of Paradise

November 8, 2010 Courting the Classics, Our Programs Comments Off

This Side of Paradise by F. Scott Fitzgerald

Review by Briana

I have loved F. Scott Fitzgerald’s works since high school and the Jazz Age has always been my favorite time period in history. I’ve met a fair number of people that don’t like his works, but it takes a certain sort of imagination to enjoy his writing style. He’s a very simple but whimsical writer. When reading his works you get swept up in a world of noise and excitement and privilege.

This Side of Paradise is a perfect example of that. Told as a series of short stories-or vignettes-tied together to make a full length novel, This Side of Paradise introduces us to Amory Blaine and takes us on a journey through his life, beginning with his years in Minneapolis while his mother Beatrice is away recovering from a nervous breakdown. We then follow him through his years at St. Regis’ school in Connecticut. Sadly, the book does not stay on this upswing of glamour and romance.

By the time Amory has gone off to college, he has become more egotistical. In fact, I found him to be quite the egotist throughout the entire book. He even admits that he spends a lot of time thinking about himself:

Amory was in full stride, confident, nervous, and jubilant. Scurrying back to Minneapolis to see a girl he had known as a child seemed the interesting and romantic thing to do, so without compunction he wired his mother not to expect him…sat in the train, and thought about himself for thirty-six hours.

This paragraph is a perfect example of his selfish nature-he wants only what he wants, when he wants it.

Throughout college, Amory splits his time between going to class and having adventures with his friends. He is still trying to find himself (which I think anyone in college is able to relate to). On a break, he spends an evening with Isabelle and wants to be with her, but knowing that he is going back to school they end the night as friends. Despite their closeness and the allusion to a possible relationship, Isabelle’s role in Amory’s life comes to an abrupt end. Once he gets back to school, he ends up going to the beach with his friends, where they manage to have quite a good time, despite the fact that they don’t have any money.

I found Amory, as a person, to be quite selfish. He is always looking out for number one and doesn’t seem to care what happens to others. He is picky about his friends and who he will allow into his life. As a character, Fitzgerald does his best to develop him and tries to help him grow as all young people should, but Amory comes across as the sort of person that you should be leery of if you met him in real life.

Honestly, this book was terrible. I found it boring and poorly executed. It is billed as semi-autobiographical and it really makes me dislike Mr. Fitzgerald as an author. I am typically a huge fan of his. I have nearly all his works and The Great Gatsby is one of my favorite books, but I am having a hard time getting through this work. I understand it’s his first and that perhaps he hadn’t found his writing niche yet, but it still feels too choppy and incomplete, even for an inaugural work. I dreaded reading this book and had to set page requirements for myself in order to get through it. I am always disappointed when a book is like that, because there are so many great books out there that I do want to fly through and find out what happens. I didn’t have any attachment to the characters in This Side of Paradise.

The interlude of this book was my favorite part, because it was the shortest. Without warning, the reader is thrust into a one act play entitled The Debutante, which was strange. The remainder of the book is somewhat existential stream of consciousness prose. Amory is going through life as if he’s the only person on earth. He wants money, but he doesn’t want to work to earn that money. He wants a girl, but doesn’t want to be married. Unfortunately, none of the women he’s met were willing to just be his girl-they all wanted to be married. And who can blame them? That was the expectation of the time.

I really feel that Mr. Fitzgerald was trying too hard with this book. He should have slowed down and treated it as a first work-not as license to write a crappy novel but as an opportunity to experience growth and learn as he wrote. The book ended very abruptly and there really was no closure to any of the stories. We have no idea what Amory or any of the other characters end up doing with their lives. I was disappointed in this book and my love for Fitzgerald has waned.

Briana has been an avid reader and writer since childhood. Besides reading and writing, she also enjoys photography and travel. Brianna received her Bachelor of Arts in English from Sierra Nevada College and is currently at work on her first novel and hopes to someday be a published author. Brianna also writes short stories and is considering writing her memoirs. Most recently she is a contributing writer for David Magazine. She can currently be found blogging at Girl Seeks Place and you can follow her Twitter feed here.

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NaNoWriMo: Dialogue Resources

October 27, 2010 Columns, Fictionista Press Comments Off

Dialogue Resources

by Tara L.

“Dialogue in fiction should be reserved for the culminating moments and regarded as the spray into which the great wave of narrative breaks in curving toward the watcher on the shore.” – Edith Wharton

As we continue to prepare for NaNoWriMo, this week’s resources will focus on the importance of dialogue. I invite you to think about a conversation that you had today. Think about, not only the things you said, but also your tone, body language, and pace. All of these things combine to convey your message, both spoken and implied. Your written characters’ conversations are no different. Their dialogue will express their own unique perspectives while keeping the reader invested in the story.

To help you write your best dialogue, Fictionista Workshop recommends the following resources:

How To Write Effective Dialogue in Fiction – The author of this article provides 6 key points to follow when writing effective dialogue, from keeping “in character” to using slang sparingly.

Basics: Dialogue – This article provides a basic overview of dialogue structure and usage.  This is a good starting point for the first time novel writer, because it provides clear examples of what resonates with readers and what does not.

Writing Dialogue with Good Tension –  This is a fantastic resource that outlines the usage of dialogue to convey tension and emotion.  The author also includes tips on highlighting a character’s unique traits through the way they speak and respond to others.

Revealing Characters Through Dialogue – All Write’s article provides information that can help you get the most out of your characters, and story, through cleverly written dialogue.

Dialogue Tags – A Study in Common Errors – LousyWriter.com offers you some insight in how to avoid the common mistakes in tagging your dialogue.

Punctuation for Dialogue – A fun look at the art of punctuating dialogue using examples from J.K. Rowling’s Harry Potter series.

As our month-long prep series comes to a close this week, Fictionista Workshop wishes everyone participating in NaNoWriMo the very best.  Please check our site throughout the month of November for support, resources, and little inspirations along the way!

Tara lives in the middle of the Midwest with her husband and two sweet children, ages 6 and 8.  She has a degree in Sociology with a focus in deviant behavior and hopes that this degree never becomes helpful in her current job–raising her children.  Tara spends her free time cooking, crafting, reading, and dreaming about writing the plot that is rattling around in her head.

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NaNoWriMo: Characterization Resources

October 20, 2010 Columns, Fictionista Press Comments Off

Characterization Resources

by Tara L.

“Begin with an individual and you find that you have created a type; begin with a type and you find that you have created–nothing.” – F. Scott Fitzgerald

Besides our basic, outward appearance and personality, what makes us who we are?  Are we defined by our religious choices or career paths?  Can we be categorized based solely on our personal philosophies, interests, or goals?  Or, as humans, are we made up of a combination of all of these things and countless others?  Written characters are no different.  They must each be given unique characteristics, histories, and paths to follow.

To help you develop these dynamic characters, Fictionista Workshop recommends the following resources:

Fiction Writer’s Character Chart –  This chart–available in .pdf form for downloads–will help you get to know your characters from physical appearance to desires, attitudes, and relationships.

You and Your Characters –  Science Fiction and Fantasy Writers of America’s website details and defines different types of characters, as well as presenting an “intuitive” approach to writing them in fiction.

Direct vs. Indirect Characterization – Fiction Factor contributor, Terry W. Ervin II, provides concise descriptions of each type of characterization along with clear examples of “showing vs. telling” in fiction writing.

Building Three Dimensional Characters – Connie Flynn, a best-selling romance writer, explores four complex traits that will give your characters dimension and growth-potential.

Editing Fiction: Characterization – Fiction Factor provides a great article on looking over your work with a critical eye.  In the characterization section, it gives several questions to ask yourself (as a reader) that will help you flesh out any authenticity issues with your characters.

Characterization – Writing Corner has a fantastic article that shows characterization as it appears in real-world examples.  The general concepts are discussed and defined, then sample paragraphs are used to highlight the characterization devices within each.

Fictionista Workshop is committed to supporting writers during their NaNoWriMo journey. Next week, we look at resources designed to help you write your best dialogue.

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NaNoWriMo: Characterization

Creating Original Characters

by Lisa Sanchez

How do we make sure our characters are original? How do we keep our precious babies from becoming boring, stereotypical Mary Sues, or insensitive Alpha Male jerks? I can’t tell you how many blogs I’ve read, or articles I’ve come across where agents and editors are begging authors to “break ground” and to “show them something new.” Most authors, myself included, tear their hair out trying to work an original idea, a fabulous new plot no one has ever heard of. And we forget: without fresh, believable characters, without a hero or heroine that makes us want to root for them, all the plot in the world won’t get you very far.

Think about your favorite book. Heck, think about your three favorite books. You know which ones I’m talking about. The books you read over and over, the ones on your shelf with the broken spines and the worn out pages. What is it about those particular books that resonate with you? The setting? Probably not. While interesting and crucial to the storyline, the setting probably isn’t what had you drooling over said book. How about the plot? Yeah, okay… if the plot is good you’ll probably be mulling it over in your head for days, if it’s really good, for weeks. But-and let me tell you, this is a big-ass but-your plot can’t go anywhere if you don’t have great characters to drive it. So, what is it about the characters in your favorite books that have you thinking about them weeks after you’ve read the book? What is so memorable about those individuals that you’re driven to read the book more than once?

One of my favorite characters is Butch O’Neil, the hero from J. R. Ward’s, Lover Revealed.  I’ve read Butch’s book so many times I’m surprised the pages aren’t falling out. Why have I read it so many times? Simple–Butch rocks my world.  I love his Boston drawl, his goofy sense of humor, the quick one-liners he throws at V and Rhage, and his shmexy dirty talking. Oh, Dear Lord, his dirty talking… but is Butch perfect? Nope. Brother’s got family issues, self-worth issues, a chipped tooth and what he refers to as a “scotch pot.” In short, Butch has layers. It’s all those wonderful layers that keep me coming back for more.

Let’s talk about what your favorite characters aren’t. They’re not clichéd. There’s not much that’s believable about a size zero heroine with a kick-ass career, a swarm of supportive friends, a house with a white picket fence, and a hero who worships her the moment he lays eyes on her. Life is messy. Friends come and go, careers crash and burn, and relationships never flow that smoothly. At least, none of mine do! Most people have flaws, bad habits, things they don’t like about themselves and baggage. People have lots and lots of baggage.

I’m a pantser (someone who writes by the seat of their pants and doesn’t plot), so when I started my first novel, Eve Of Samhain, I knew very little about my characters. Yes, yes… obviously I knew what they looked like, and I had a concrete idea as to their personalities: a tough, sexy alpha male and a feisty, no-nonsense girl. But what I found myself concentrating on more in the beginning was what I didn’t want them to be.

Let’s use my hero, Quinn, as an example. I love me an alpha male, and while I wanted Quinn to be bad-ass, I didn’t want him to be an ass. At least not through the entire book! Bad boy needed to learn how to play with others, grow emotionally, and redeem himself. I don’t want to give too much of the book away, so I’ll just say that when all was said and done, I ended up with a stubborn hero, who, despite his sexual prowess and charm, lived a very lonely life, and covered up that loneliness with crass humor and wit. My goal with Quinn was to have him make you laugh one moment, and feel sorry for him the next, to cheer “hell yeah” when he kicked demon ass, and swoon moments later when he worked his smoldering charm. To accomplish that goal, I drew not only from the traits I look for in a person, but from the people around me as well.

Think back to your favorite characters. Take stock of what was memorable about them, what irritated you, what didn’t work. Look at the people in your own life. What draws you to them? What makes you keep coming back for more? Are they perfect? Probably not. We’re all flawed, and honestly, that’s what makes us interesting. Does your husband have a wicked sense of humor? Know a control freak who has to have their hand in every little thing? Draw from the people around you. And no, I don’t mean model your character after your Great Uncle Joe. Take snippets of different personality traits here and there. Rework phrases, mannerisms, and use those things to build yourself an authentic, original character that’s all your own. After you’ve done all that, make sure you have a critique partner you trust. A fresh set of eyes and an honest opinion is invaluable.

Lisa Sanchez’s lifelong love of writing, coupled with her ability to weave together an intricate and compelling story has led to the release of her first published novel, Eve Of Samhain. In her role as a busy stay-at-home and self proclaimed “cheer mom,” on any given day Lisa wears a number of different hats. From taxi driver to chef, nurse to seamstress, laundry woman to enforcer, and, of course, writer, Lisa manages to keep everything together while caring for her husband and three children. The few spare moments left in her day are usually spent reading or writing, and if she’s really lucky, possibly even catching up on some much needed sleep. Lisa and her family currently reside in Tracy, California. To learn more about her, please visit her website www.eveofsamhain.com.

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NaNoWriMo: Research

October 14, 2010 Columns, Fictionista Press Comments Off

Research

by Tara L.

If there is one thing that successful writers from all genres have in common, it’s good research.  Without it, a plot can’t be fully realized, characters fall flat, and settings tear apart at the seams.  For example, if I ask you to picture a hulking, 10th century Viking King, does the name Blaine sound like a good fit?  Would it make sense to have Blaine-The-Terrible captaining a specialized Spanish Armada ship?  Probably not.  While readers will often forgive small incongruities in a story, large errors can pull the reader out of the narrative and make it difficult to follow.

Luckily for today’s writer, good research can often times be just a few mouse clicks away.  Here are a few online resources to jump start your research:

Little Details - Little Details is a Live Journal community that bills itself as a “community for writers concerned about factual accuracy in their stories.” Writers can post specific questions relating to their own story, or simply search tags to review all of the information amassed on a specific topic.

Shelly Thacker – Prolific author, Shelly Thacker Meinhardt, outlines 7 key steps to successful research.

HistoryBuff.com – A great resource for any writer that is venturing into historical settings.  The site focuses primarily on how news of major, and not so major, events in American History were reported in newspapers of that time.

Library Spot – A research hub that is a great starting point to any research project.  It provides breakdowns of online literary sources that start out very general, but can be distilled into very specific areas of information.

So grab your outline, open your browser, and find the details you need to make your story sing.  Next week Fictionista Workshop will look at the process of creating original characters as we continue to provide resources for NaNoWriMo writers.

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