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NaNoWriMo: Resources for December

December 9, 2010 Columns, Fictionista Press Comments Off

Self-Editing

by Tara L.

Congratulations to everyone who participated in NaNoWriMo 2010!  Whether you met the 50,000 word goal or your own personal benchmark, the question is this:  What do I do now?  No matter if you want to polish your work for publication, or just clean it up for your personal enjoyment, the next step is self-editing.

Fictionista Workshop recommends the following resources to help you start your editing process.

Tips For Editing Your Own Novel — BubbleCow offers writers tips from grammar to formatting, tense, and narrative arc.  This resource will help you revise your copy and get it to its peak form.

Twelve Common Errors: A Self-Editing Checklist for Students — While this resource from UW-Madison’s Writing Center may be aimed at helping students edit their school work, you are never too old to revisit some basic writing rules.

Editing Fiction — Fiction Factor breaks down your story into specific editing areas, while highlighting common pitfalls for each.

10+ Ways to Improve Your Writing by Self-Editing –  Tech Republic’s article offers up 10+ tips for polishing your writing, including specific editing practices and proofreading guides.

Grammar Guide for Self-Editing — Bertram’s Blog guest host, Paul Allen Leoncini, offers grammar advice he received from agent Kelly Mortimer.  The list includes common mistakes (a while vs. awhile) and a list of synonyms for commonly overused adjectives.

As always, Fictionista Workshop is committed to supporting writers in all stages of their writing journey.  Next week, we look at resources designed to help you navigate the query process.

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Chick Lit: Interview with Alisa Kwitney and Robyn Harding

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Some books are the perfect read for a breezy summer day, while others may require more concentrated attention.  In the last decade, fiction falling into the first category which have female protagonists are often labeled “chick lit,” while novels fitting the second category strive to be considered “literature.”  Over the next several weeks, Fictionista Workshop will consider chick lit and its place on our collective bookshelves through a series of interviews, essays and conversations about this new genre.

Love it or hate it, chick lit has become a label for a body of modern fiction.  Join us for a look at this phenomenon and its impact upon writers and readers.

We begin this series with a discussion between American author Alisa Kwitney and Canadian author Robyn Harding as they answer questions about why they love the genre, if not its moniker.

A Chick By Any Other Name: Does Chick Lit Need to be Re-Branded?

Horror. Mystery. Science Fiction. Romance. Chick lit. Among all these other genre names, “chick lit” stands out. It is clever, breezy and evocative of a certain happy fluffiness. But does the very name “chick lit” keep readers and critics from taking a book seriously? Authors Alisa Kwitney and Robyn Harding answer ten questions about chick lit and why they love the genre but not the name.

Q: When you began writing, did you set out to write a chick lit novel?

AK: Back in 1991, when my first novel was published, I don’t think the term had been coined. That was a long time ago, back before everyone had cell phones and surfed the internet, back when Mel Gibson was still insanely attractive but not openly insane. These days, a coming of age novel about a college freshman which deals with issues of food, weight and romance would be called chick lit. Back then, it was called “a comedy of manners” and was actually reviewed in the Sunday New York Times.

RH: When I wrote my first novel, The Journal of Mortifying Moments, I didn’t think about genre. I didn’t think about how my book would be marketed, where it would ultimately reside in the book store, or what color the cover would be. I just wanted to tell a story with heart and humor; a story that would be fun to read and fun to write.

Q: So when did you first discover that what you were writing was considered chick lit?

RH: In 2003, I sent my manuscript off to every fiction publisher in Canada (I’m Canadian), and within a few short months, I received rejection letters from all of them. According to these soul-destroying letters, Canadian publishers weren’t interested in commercial fiction. But when I submitted my manuscript in the US and the UK, I was immediately met with more interest. On the same day, I had calls from an editor in London and an agent in New York. They were both excited about my manuscript because “chick lit” was such a hot genre.

AK: My second novel, The Dominant Blonde, was written as a cross between a romance and a scuba diving caper. My natural tone tends toward dark humor, so when I was describing it, I called it “Carl Hiaasen on estrogen.” But when I submitted it, Avon said they thought the book could fit into their new trade paperback program. Somewhere along the line, I discovered that my book was now part of the chick lit flock.

Q: How did you feel about being labeled chick lit?

AK: I didn’t mind at all. I was a comic book editor, and I’ve always been a big fan of genre “I read romance, science fiction, horror, fantasy and mystery, as well as literary fiction. And my father was a science fiction author back when SF was considered pulpy trash. So I was thrilled to discover that my book happened to be part of a new genre that was both popular and clever.

RH: I was excited to be a part of this hot new trend. (Actually, I was so excited to be published, that they could have labeled my book “dog’s vomit” and I would have been okay with it.)

Q: Was there a downside to having your books published as chick lit?

RH: Around the time The Journal of Mortifying Moments hit the shelves with its pink cover (2004), I noticed that there were a lot of other pink books out there. Perhaps it was this saturation that led to something of a chick lit backlash. Suddenly, the term had become an insult. The genre was sniffed at by critics and journalists who dismissed it as mind numbing fluff. I soon realized that books with a female protagonist, a sense of humor and a pink cover, were somewhat marginalized.

AK: When chick lit was booming, there were a lot of lookalike covers on the shelves, and critics complained that the books all marched in downy yellow lockstep. In a cartoon from an English humor magazine, a picture of a Xerox machine was subtitled “Chick lit Author’s Writing Tool.”
But the truth was, there has always been a lot of variety in what gets called chick lit. The humor in chick lit could be clever and light or dark and raw. In some cases, of course, it could be facile and glib.   Some of the books were better than others. Some of the books were wonderful. And, as in any genre, some entries were embarrassingly bad.

Most of the critics didn’t make any distinctions, because most of them didn’t bother to actually open the books and read them. In her 2007 New York Times column, Maureen Dowd wrote, “I took home three dozen of the working women romances. They can lull you into a hypnotic state with their simple life lessons “one heroine emulated Doris Day, another Audrey Hepburn, one was the spitting image of Carolyn Bessette, another Charlize Theron “but they’re a long way from Becky Sharp and Elizabeth Bennet. They’re all chick and no lit.”

In that column, Dowd claimed to have read the novels, but I saw no sentence that suggested that she had done more than glance at the covers and skim the back cover copy. If she had submitted that essay to a fifth grade teacher, it would have come back with a scrawled red pencil comment: Give specific examples.

Q: Publishing trends come and go, but the backlash against chick lit was particularly strong. Do you have any theories as to why so many critics and authors, many of them women, publicly disparage the genre?

RH: One of the best examples of this “dispute” is the battle of the anthologies. In 2006, an anthology was released called This Is Not Chick Lit, Original Stories by America’s Best Women Writers. In the foreword, ironically entitled, “Why Chick Lit matters” editor Elizabeth Merrick writes that it’s okay to occasionally escape into “cotton candy entertainment.” She even admitted to (gasp) sporadically reading celebrity gossip magazines when she’s trying to pass time on the treadmill. But she also said that chick lit is formulaic, full of stock characters, “numbs the senses” and “reduces the complexity of the human experience.” Worse still, the genre was taking readers away from female writers of literary fiction who were more intelligent, thought provoking, and challenging, and who, obviously, were contributing short stories to her anthology.

In response, another anthology was released. This one was entitled: This Is Chick Lit (to be read with heavy emphasis on the Is, I’m sure). The editor of this book, Lauren Baratz-Logsted admitted that her anthology was “born out of anger”. Wasn’t it a shame, she wrote, that women were judging each other on what they were reading and what they were writing (though this sort of criticism dates back to1848 when Charlotte Brontë insulted Jane Austen’s work). In Baratz-Logsted’s opinion, reading was about entertainment, about escaping into a world with new friends, new relationships and new problems to over come – all of which chick lit books provide. She also said that to her, there are only two kinds of books: good, well written stories and bad, poorly written stories.

One of the most vocal critics of the chick lit genre (and contributor to This Is Not Chick Lit) has to be Curtis Sittenfeld (author of Prep, American Wife… ). In her New York Times review of Melissa Banks’ new novel The Wonder Spot, Sittenfeld said that calling a female writer’s novel chick lit is catty, not unlike calling her a slut.

One theory I’ve heard to explain the antagonism between female commercial writers (chicks) and literary writers (lits) is this: literary writers envy commercial writers their sales, while commercial writers envy literary writers’ reviews and accolades.

AK: For years, women’s traditional art forms, such as quilting, were thought to be somehow lesser than male forms, such as crafting furniture. Traditionally female occupations, such as nursing, were undervalued. Most early women novelists were derided as “scribblers,” and I think it’s been subconsciously ingrained in us that traditionally male pastimes are somehow more acceptable than traditionally female ones. Otherwise, why would violent thrillers receive less derision than romantic and domestic novels?

Q: Is there a good definition of chick lit? What is a chick lit novel?

AK: In the beginning of the nineties, most novels labeled “chick lit” employed a first person, humorous voice and a heroine in her twenties or thirties who works in publishing, and contains tales of domestic and romantic misadventure.

(As an aside, this need not damn the whole genre as derivative pap. The classic detective novel employs a hard-boiled, first person voice and a hero in his thirties who works as a private eye, and contains tales of domestic and romantic misadventure, along with some crime and violence. Classic horror and science fiction novels tend to have elements in common, as well.)

In any case, chick lit’s coming of age and “first job in the big city” novels were quickly joined by novels about women grappling with marriages, childbearing, midlife crises, betrayal and divorce. Sometimes the books were dubbed “hen-lit,” when the heroines were older; male writers’ domestic and romantic satires were termed “lad-lit.” But by and large, after 1998 or so, chick lit became a blanket term for almost any book written by a woman, provided it contained elements of humor and domestic drama.

RH: I agree that initially, chick lit described novels about a young woman trying to come into her own; find Mr. Right, the perfect job and lose 10 pounds. But I’ve written about murder, betrayal, divorce, midlife crises, and the struggle to raise a family. But I do so with a sense of humor. And I’m a woman. To many people, that makes me a chick lit author.

Q: So when is chick lit not chick lit?

AK: At this point, so many different kinds of books are called “chick lit” that I feel like everything is chick lit, and nothing is. I read an article about Eastern European and Indian and Scandinavian chick lit and how many of these novels deal with issues of rape and oppression. I have to say, there is something that feels very odd about calling a book “chick lit” if it deals with serious subjects in a serious manner – even if the author also uses humor.

RH: Ultimately, it’s the publisher who determines whether a book falls into the chick lit category. They choose the cover, the marketing, and the placement in the bookstore. My latest book, Chronicles of a Midlife Crisis is split between two narrators: one male, one female. And yet, it has a bra on the cover. (I’m not complaining. It’s a very nice bra.)

Q: Why do so many chick lit writers seem obsessed with Jane Austen?

AK: I think it’s tokenism. Jane Austen is the token domestic/romantic author who is granted literary status. But while Austen is wonderful, she is not the only sign of intelligent life in the romantic universe. There are other good writers out there who are concerned with romance and marriage but are not facile or shallow.

RH: I think a lot of us are obsessed with Dorothy Parker: her wit and intelligence.

AK: I love Dorothy Parker!

Q: Do male “lad lit” writers get treated differently than female “chick lit” writers?

AK: Absolutely. I’ve heard it said that if you want to write chick lit or romance and become a best-seller, write it under a man’s name and have somebody die. And even though I loved a certain current best seller, that axiom did occur to me when I read it.

RH: Nick Hornby is probably the quintessential “lad lit” writer, but based on his critical and commercial success, the label isn’t looked down on like its feminine counterpart. With women’s light fiction, we’ve got labels up the yin yang: Mommy lit, hen lit, knit lit, Christian lit, bride lit, widow lit, ethnic lit, and mystery chick lit. It’s the same with films. A female driven comedy is a “chick flick”. A male driven comedy is… a comedy. It makes me wonder why women are subject to so many labels when men are not.

Q: Does Chick Lit need to be rebranded?

AK: I don’t know. Sometimes I think we should embrace the “chick lit” label with a rebel “Dixie Chicks” spirit, and wear the downy yellow mantle with pride. At other times I think that the problem with labels is that they are, by definition, limiting. Interestingly enough, in the UK, where chick lit never went out of fashion the way it did in the US, a lot of reviewers no longer use the term.

At the end of the day, though, I did just decide to join a chick lit themed Facebook group because I knew I would meet kindred spirits.

RH: I know that these labels come down to marketing, which I totally get. What I don’t get are the sneers, the snubs and the condescension. Why is women’s humor so devalued? And what’s wrong with wanting to be uplifted by a book or a film, to see the comedy in even the most dramatic situations? But when a reader emails me and says I made her laugh, or cry, or she felt like I understood what she’s going through, I don’t care about being labeled. I’m just happy to be a writer.

To learn more about Alisa Kwitney, visit www.alisakwitney.com.
To learn more about Robyn Harding, visit www.robynharding.com.

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NaNoWriMo: Dialogue

October 29, 2010 Columns, Fictionista Press Comments Off

by Saranna DeWylde

“First you didn’t want her to love a demon, and now you don’t want her to love a man. Which is it, Seraphim? You can’t relive your choices through your granddaughter no matter how much you’d like to.”

“I’m not trying to relive my choices. I wouldn’t change any of them.”

“Even your deal with me?” Hades asked softly.

“Even that. I wouldn’t have had Aurora without you and I am thankful for every second of her life that I got to share. I guess we did that right.”

“We certainly did.” Hades sighed. “Look, Sera, I know I don’t have the best track record. Persephone dropped me like a bad habit almost right after we were married. I’d like to think I’ve changed in a couple centuries. I really do love you and I’m asking you to marry me.”

“What, right now?” Seraphim gasped with surprise.

“That’s not the answer that I’m looking for, Seraphim Stregaria. I didn’t want to have to remind you of your promise, but I will do it if I have to.”
“Isn’t that what cost you Persephone?”

“No, it was her unnaturally-attached mother.”

“You know what I mean.” Seraphim eyed him meaningfully.

“Fine. I release you from your vow.”

“Thank you,” Seraphim picked up a catalog and browsed the shoes. That would be the vice that damned her, not the Devil riding.

“And?” Hades asked, clearly waiting for something.

“And what?”

“I released you. Now you’re supposed to capitulate and agree to marry me.”

“Not if you only released me because you expected something in return.” Seraphim said calmly.

“Well of course I expected something in return. I’m the Devil.”

“A fact that you keep reminding me of. It’s kind of like getting bad service at a restaurant and the customer keeps saying, ‘Don’t you know who I am?’ Yes. I know who you are and I don’t care.”

He considered for a moment. “Fine. Now you can say you got the better of me. I don’t care either. Put the ring on.” Hades shoved it at her.

~From How to Lose a Demon in 10 Days, Kensington Brava 2012

Writing dialogue is like having a multiple personality disorder, only you’re in charge of when the switch happens. My daughter was watching me work on my work in progress a few days ago and mocked me horribly because I kept making faces at the monitor like a kid at the zoo taunting the baboons. When my heroine smiled, I smiled. When my hero scowled and looked “thunderous,” I did too. When he said something that cracked her heart like a bad tooth, I may have sniffed a little bit. My facial expressions ran the gamut and I was sitting here by myself, clickety-clacking away. I even raised my brow and pursed my lips like Scarlett O’ Hara to something the hero said.

Supposedly, this dialogue comes from my own brain, so I shouldn’t be startled by anything I put to paper. But I am. Why? Because I’m not in my own head. I jump back and forth between my characters in every scene. I feel every indrawn breath, every pause, every slam-dancing butterfly in their bellies and every brick that junk punches them. Even my villains. They are all individuals with their own motivations, their own experiences and feelings. They aren’t me, and yet, they are.

My voice comes through in everything my characters say, even though they are distinctly their own creatures. There are only so many story lines, so many plot devices. What makes a book spectacular is the soul of the book: the voice. For me as a reader, that’s what makes a book unique and wonderful.

Dialogue is a great place to share information with your reader and other characters without doing the ever reviled “info dump.” It’s also a place for us to see the sparks between the characters, to see what fuels their relationships. You can learn most of what you need to know about a character through dialogue and their reactions to other characters’ dialogue. Dialogue should flow; it should be something you can read out loud without getting your tongue all twisted up.

In my own work, where the love and redemption are the heart of the piece, the dialogue is like the veins. It carries things from place to place, emotions, thoughts, and even action. Banter is my particular weakness.

I’ve been told both that I have a talent for dialogue and others have said the banter has to stop sometime. My question is why. Why does it have to stop? Because real people aren’t like that? Yes, they are. I’ve been married to my own Prince Charming for eleven years and he still gives me a run for my money. Our conversations are like watching a tennis ball being smacked back and forth, only without the lame grunts.
Unless it’s only grunts, but then that’s something else entirely. *wink*

Saranna DeWylde is a published author of short horror, erotica and romance. To learn more about her, please visit her website www.sarannadewylde.com

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NaNoWriMo: Dialogue Resources

October 27, 2010 Columns, Fictionista Press Comments Off

Dialogue Resources

by Tara L.

“Dialogue in fiction should be reserved for the culminating moments and regarded as the spray into which the great wave of narrative breaks in curving toward the watcher on the shore.” – Edith Wharton

As we continue to prepare for NaNoWriMo, this week’s resources will focus on the importance of dialogue. I invite you to think about a conversation that you had today. Think about, not only the things you said, but also your tone, body language, and pace. All of these things combine to convey your message, both spoken and implied. Your written characters’ conversations are no different. Their dialogue will express their own unique perspectives while keeping the reader invested in the story.

To help you write your best dialogue, Fictionista Workshop recommends the following resources:

How To Write Effective Dialogue in Fiction – The author of this article provides 6 key points to follow when writing effective dialogue, from keeping “in character” to using slang sparingly.

Basics: Dialogue – This article provides a basic overview of dialogue structure and usage.  This is a good starting point for the first time novel writer, because it provides clear examples of what resonates with readers and what does not.

Writing Dialogue with Good Tension –  This is a fantastic resource that outlines the usage of dialogue to convey tension and emotion.  The author also includes tips on highlighting a character’s unique traits through the way they speak and respond to others.

Revealing Characters Through Dialogue – All Write’s article provides information that can help you get the most out of your characters, and story, through cleverly written dialogue.

Dialogue Tags – A Study in Common Errors – LousyWriter.com offers you some insight in how to avoid the common mistakes in tagging your dialogue.

Punctuation for Dialogue – A fun look at the art of punctuating dialogue using examples from J.K. Rowling’s Harry Potter series.

As our month-long prep series comes to a close this week, Fictionista Workshop wishes everyone participating in NaNoWriMo the very best.  Please check our site throughout the month of November for support, resources, and little inspirations along the way!

Tara lives in the middle of the Midwest with her husband and two sweet children, ages 6 and 8.  She has a degree in Sociology with a focus in deviant behavior and hopes that this degree never becomes helpful in her current job–raising her children.  Tara spends her free time cooking, crafting, reading, and dreaming about writing the plot that is rattling around in her head.

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NaNoWriMo: Characterization Resources

October 20, 2010 Columns, Fictionista Press Comments Off

Characterization Resources

by Tara L.

“Begin with an individual and you find that you have created a type; begin with a type and you find that you have created–nothing.” – F. Scott Fitzgerald

Besides our basic, outward appearance and personality, what makes us who we are?  Are we defined by our religious choices or career paths?  Can we be categorized based solely on our personal philosophies, interests, or goals?  Or, as humans, are we made up of a combination of all of these things and countless others?  Written characters are no different.  They must each be given unique characteristics, histories, and paths to follow.

To help you develop these dynamic characters, Fictionista Workshop recommends the following resources:

Fiction Writer’s Character Chart –  This chart–available in .pdf form for downloads–will help you get to know your characters from physical appearance to desires, attitudes, and relationships.

You and Your Characters –  Science Fiction and Fantasy Writers of America’s website details and defines different types of characters, as well as presenting an “intuitive” approach to writing them in fiction.

Direct vs. Indirect Characterization – Fiction Factor contributor, Terry W. Ervin II, provides concise descriptions of each type of characterization along with clear examples of “showing vs. telling” in fiction writing.

Building Three Dimensional Characters – Connie Flynn, a best-selling romance writer, explores four complex traits that will give your characters dimension and growth-potential.

Editing Fiction: Characterization – Fiction Factor provides a great article on looking over your work with a critical eye.  In the characterization section, it gives several questions to ask yourself (as a reader) that will help you flesh out any authenticity issues with your characters.

Characterization – Writing Corner has a fantastic article that shows characterization as it appears in real-world examples.  The general concepts are discussed and defined, then sample paragraphs are used to highlight the characterization devices within each.

Fictionista Workshop is committed to supporting writers during their NaNoWriMo journey. Next week, we look at resources designed to help you write your best dialogue.

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NaNoWriMo: Characterization

Creating Original Characters

by Lisa Sanchez

How do we make sure our characters are original? How do we keep our precious babies from becoming boring, stereotypical Mary Sues, or insensitive Alpha Male jerks? I can’t tell you how many blogs I’ve read, or articles I’ve come across where agents and editors are begging authors to “break ground” and to “show them something new.” Most authors, myself included, tear their hair out trying to work an original idea, a fabulous new plot no one has ever heard of. And we forget: without fresh, believable characters, without a hero or heroine that makes us want to root for them, all the plot in the world won’t get you very far.

Think about your favorite book. Heck, think about your three favorite books. You know which ones I’m talking about. The books you read over and over, the ones on your shelf with the broken spines and the worn out pages. What is it about those particular books that resonate with you? The setting? Probably not. While interesting and crucial to the storyline, the setting probably isn’t what had you drooling over said book. How about the plot? Yeah, okay… if the plot is good you’ll probably be mulling it over in your head for days, if it’s really good, for weeks. But-and let me tell you, this is a big-ass but-your plot can’t go anywhere if you don’t have great characters to drive it. So, what is it about the characters in your favorite books that have you thinking about them weeks after you’ve read the book? What is so memorable about those individuals that you’re driven to read the book more than once?

One of my favorite characters is Butch O’Neil, the hero from J. R. Ward’s, Lover Revealed.  I’ve read Butch’s book so many times I’m surprised the pages aren’t falling out. Why have I read it so many times? Simple–Butch rocks my world.  I love his Boston drawl, his goofy sense of humor, the quick one-liners he throws at V and Rhage, and his shmexy dirty talking. Oh, Dear Lord, his dirty talking… but is Butch perfect? Nope. Brother’s got family issues, self-worth issues, a chipped tooth and what he refers to as a “scotch pot.” In short, Butch has layers. It’s all those wonderful layers that keep me coming back for more.

Let’s talk about what your favorite characters aren’t. They’re not clichéd. There’s not much that’s believable about a size zero heroine with a kick-ass career, a swarm of supportive friends, a house with a white picket fence, and a hero who worships her the moment he lays eyes on her. Life is messy. Friends come and go, careers crash and burn, and relationships never flow that smoothly. At least, none of mine do! Most people have flaws, bad habits, things they don’t like about themselves and baggage. People have lots and lots of baggage.

I’m a pantser (someone who writes by the seat of their pants and doesn’t plot), so when I started my first novel, Eve Of Samhain, I knew very little about my characters. Yes, yes… obviously I knew what they looked like, and I had a concrete idea as to their personalities: a tough, sexy alpha male and a feisty, no-nonsense girl. But what I found myself concentrating on more in the beginning was what I didn’t want them to be.

Let’s use my hero, Quinn, as an example. I love me an alpha male, and while I wanted Quinn to be bad-ass, I didn’t want him to be an ass. At least not through the entire book! Bad boy needed to learn how to play with others, grow emotionally, and redeem himself. I don’t want to give too much of the book away, so I’ll just say that when all was said and done, I ended up with a stubborn hero, who, despite his sexual prowess and charm, lived a very lonely life, and covered up that loneliness with crass humor and wit. My goal with Quinn was to have him make you laugh one moment, and feel sorry for him the next, to cheer “hell yeah” when he kicked demon ass, and swoon moments later when he worked his smoldering charm. To accomplish that goal, I drew not only from the traits I look for in a person, but from the people around me as well.

Think back to your favorite characters. Take stock of what was memorable about them, what irritated you, what didn’t work. Look at the people in your own life. What draws you to them? What makes you keep coming back for more? Are they perfect? Probably not. We’re all flawed, and honestly, that’s what makes us interesting. Does your husband have a wicked sense of humor? Know a control freak who has to have their hand in every little thing? Draw from the people around you. And no, I don’t mean model your character after your Great Uncle Joe. Take snippets of different personality traits here and there. Rework phrases, mannerisms, and use those things to build yourself an authentic, original character that’s all your own. After you’ve done all that, make sure you have a critique partner you trust. A fresh set of eyes and an honest opinion is invaluable.

Lisa Sanchez’s lifelong love of writing, coupled with her ability to weave together an intricate and compelling story has led to the release of her first published novel, Eve Of Samhain. In her role as a busy stay-at-home and self proclaimed “cheer mom,” on any given day Lisa wears a number of different hats. From taxi driver to chef, nurse to seamstress, laundry woman to enforcer, and, of course, writer, Lisa manages to keep everything together while caring for her husband and three children. The few spare moments left in her day are usually spent reading or writing, and if she’s really lucky, possibly even catching up on some much needed sleep. Lisa and her family currently reside in Tracy, California. To learn more about her, please visit her website www.eveofsamhain.com.

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NaNoWriMo: Research

October 14, 2010 Columns, Fictionista Press Comments Off

Research

by Tara L.

If there is one thing that successful writers from all genres have in common, it’s good research.  Without it, a plot can’t be fully realized, characters fall flat, and settings tear apart at the seams.  For example, if I ask you to picture a hulking, 10th century Viking King, does the name Blaine sound like a good fit?  Would it make sense to have Blaine-The-Terrible captaining a specialized Spanish Armada ship?  Probably not.  While readers will often forgive small incongruities in a story, large errors can pull the reader out of the narrative and make it difficult to follow.

Luckily for today’s writer, good research can often times be just a few mouse clicks away.  Here are a few online resources to jump start your research:

Little Details - Little Details is a Live Journal community that bills itself as a “community for writers concerned about factual accuracy in their stories.” Writers can post specific questions relating to their own story, or simply search tags to review all of the information amassed on a specific topic.

Shelly Thacker – Prolific author, Shelly Thacker Meinhardt, outlines 7 key steps to successful research.

HistoryBuff.com – A great resource for any writer that is venturing into historical settings.  The site focuses primarily on how news of major, and not so major, events in American History were reported in newspapers of that time.

Library Spot – A research hub that is a great starting point to any research project.  It provides breakdowns of online literary sources that start out very general, but can be distilled into very specific areas of information.

So grab your outline, open your browser, and find the details you need to make your story sing.  Next week Fictionista Workshop will look at the process of creating original characters as we continue to provide resources for NaNoWriMo writers.

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NaNoWriMo: Story Development

Outlining for the Pantser, Pantsing for the Outliner:

Planning just enough and winging it sufficiently so you don’t get stuck during NaNoWriMo

by Killian McRae

Do you know what you’re having for dinner tonight?

Okay, how about tomorrow night?

If you have your meals planned out, even three days from now, chances are you take the same methodical approach with your writing. That is, before you even label the first page with a prominent CHAPTER ONE across the top, you have your story mapped, tracked, and tagged. You know exactly where it’s going, who falls in love, who dies, who gets abducted by aliens, etc.  You, my dear writer, are an outliner. Nothing left to chance or folly, you hit your novel with all the strategy and wherewithal of a Roman general on the field of battle. You know what your character finds behind door number three, and you like it that way. Now, all you need to do is take that skeleton you have in the corner, and write some clothes, flesh and muscles on him.

Then, there are writers like me. We are a different lot who sips tea while waxing the words poetic and listening for the muse whenever and however she may call upon us. We’re not just working on one manuscript, we likely have four or five competing projects going at any point. Each one is at a critical point where we’ve run out of words, where the flow of our creative juices has run dry, or where we just plain grew tired of thinking about it. Oh, they’re not abandoned, but our heroine has just grabbed the car keys and left in a huff after having a fight with  her mother, and we just haven’t figured out yet to where she’s driving to or why. We have an idea, but every time we sit down and start her dialogue as she enters the gay bar on 3rd & Vine, we remember that we didn’t want her to go there until after she met the guy with blue glasses, because then she would have noticed the mechanical bull already that we weren’t planning on her discovering until after she robbed the bank. Yes, we have ideas. Too many, in fact, to the point that where we don’t know where to take them without our story taking an emergency exit to Tangentville. It’s not lack of direction, it’s lack of destination that plagues us. We write by the seat of our pants and by the grace of the coffee in our cups. We are the pansters.

And one thing we pantsers have in common with the outliners is this: Come NaNoWriMo, we’re both screwed.

As with many things in life, those at the two extremes of the spectrum have more in common with each other than those in the middle. Plan too much, and you feel obligated to stay on the scheduled tour, even when you see an interesting spire rising from the sky in the distance. Don’t plan enough, and you’ll wander around the fictional streets between the Conflicts and Resolutions districts without finding an efficient route in between. In short, you’ll get lost and get stuck.  In NaNoWriMo, time is of the essence. Writing fifty thousand words in the span of thirty days is a completely achievable task, but only if one does not get mired down in the process of writing. Having too much of a plan may lead you to feel overly confident. That is, you may be all hat and no cowboy, taking on your novel knowing what you’re going to write, but not how. Also, writing is an art form, and in art there must be wiggle room to allow the artist to mold inspiration. Likewise, having no clear plan but only vague ideas may lead one to get delayed in the art of writing by overindulging in the process behind the words.

May I be so humble as to suggest, at least in preparation for NaNoWriMo, a hybrid of the two approaches?

I think it’s good to have more than a vague idea of what you’re going to write. I’ll admit, even as a pantser, I’m gearing up by at least sitting down and making a bullet point list of the major plot points of my story. I know, however, if I get wrapped up in microploting my characters’ actions before hand, I’ll lose inspiration and drive to tell the story. Think of it this way. I feel like I’m standing in the land of good intentions and yet-to-start actions, and across the river of Novelia, the imaginary land where I live most the time, lies Fifty Kay Acres. I need to build a bridge to this place, so I’m now pouring the concrete that will make up the pillars. But to truly cross the bridge I’m going to need to lay down the road. I’ve got all my materials ready, but I’m pacing myself to show up over at Fifty Kay by December 1st.

Yeah, I use metaphors a lot. Sorry about that.

Some other tactics you might want to consider as you plan your own NaNoWriMo are listed below. The methods combine the best of the pantsing and planner approachers, allowing one to overcome the shortfalls with each.

  • The Post-it Method: Who are your characters? What are the major events in your book? What is the journey? Write a little something about each of these things on post-it notes that you can either put on the wall near where you write, or in a binder you can easily access. Then, arrange them. How? Well, chronologically perhaps. Or if you’re more a punster, perhaps by want. There’s nothing wrong with having conflicting post-its about where your story might go. As you head in one direction or another, or as you achieve the plot point, take it down and make a stack. Not only will this keep you on track, the stack of post-its will give you a visual confirmation that all your hard work is adding up.
  • The Flow Chart Method: That’s right, flow charts. Now, you don’t have to stick to all the rules, but just chart out your story. Make sure you leave room on the side to make notes. You can then branch out with different ideas if you have several about the twist your plot might take. As you eliminate options or advance in your plot, ex-out the unnecessary bits.
  • The Popsicle Stick Method: Go to your local craft store and purchase a bag of popsicle sticks. Write possible routes your story might take or details about your characters on as many as you feel comfortable with, then throw them in a bag. When you get stuck or need a pointer, randomly draw out a popsicle stick and remind yourself what you were thinking of when you wrote it and, more importantly, how you frame that in what you’re writing now.
  • Use a recycled plot. I’m not joking on this one. A wise friend constantly reminds me that there are no new stories. In fact, I don’t really believe that, but I will admit that there are very few. What changes are the details. If plotting isn’t your thing, but your excel at detail, at capturing the human condition, at examining the clockwork of soul, by all means recycle. But be wary: I’m not saying plagiarize. Plagiarism is bad, wrong, and lazy.  But there are some generalized plots you see over and over, and don’t necessary get warn. The young lovers separated by the station of their families, for example, or the virtuous, strong hero overthrowing the tyrannical despot. It’s okay to tell a classic story, as long as the story you’re telling is yours.
  • Phone a friend. Do you have a person in your life who just… gets you? Why not use them as a bouncing board. Throw off some ideas about your book and get their general reaction. Perhaps even stage a fake pitch, as though your friend is an agent and you’re trying to sell your intended book to them.
  • Pantsers: cut off shorts are also comfy. If you’re a pantser like me, you’re convinced that “outlining” is an ancient Norwegian cuss word. How about blurbing? Can you contain the essence of your book in 200 words or less? If not, why not give it a try? The brevity will give you lots of room to work as inspiration hits, but having a basic summary will orientate you about where you’re going.

Whatever method you use to help you get ready for NaNoWriMo, the most important thing is this: write. Write every day, even if only 100 words. Even if you know you’re going to delete those words in the first draft, write. Rome wasn’t built in a day, but the novel about it might be written in a month.

Killian McRae is an aspiring writer of romance, alternative history, and fantasy fiction, and also has a sizable portfolio of derivative fiction. Her first published novel, 12.21.12, will be released in December 2010. To learn more about her, please visit her website www.killianmcrae.com.

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What is NaNoWriMo?

by Killian McRae

NaNoWriMo is an abbreviation for the National Novel Writing Month. The challenge: Write 50,000 words towards a novel between November 1 and November 30.

Since 50K is a lot of output in a short time, the focus is on the writing, not editing, revising or plotting. To stand a good chance of reaching the goal, you have to hit the ground running. Spending the next few weeks preparing will help you in the effort, and to that end Fictionista Workshop will be posting several articles and resource lists to assist writers.

If you’re willing to give it a go, it also helps to build up a support network. Join with us on the Forums, and/or sign up for the official program at www.nanowrimo.org. Have a blog or website? Put a meter (available at the official website) on your page.

Remember, even if you don’t make fifty thousand, every step forward is a step that gains ground.

Week 1: Story Development

Week 2: Research

Week 3: Characterization, Characterization Resources

Week 4: Dialogue, Dialogue Resources

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